New Blogs

See the links on the left side column of this page. I have created new blogs/pages for each of my books;

The Adventures of Chris Mouse; a Christmas story for the child in all of us


PROVIDENCE; a love story

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On Writing Dialogue

Do we write what we hear, or what’s intended?
Is consistency in character necessary when we write dialogue?
Do we need to make that differentiation?

The answer to the above questions is “yes” … except when it’s “no”.

If you’re writing non-fiction, or any other “serious” genera, you will want to avoid any  slang at all; unless you are trying to record a person’s quote exactly as given.

If you’re writing fiction, however, writing different speech patters, slang, dialect, or accent can improve the flow, the look, and the need for constant repetition of phrases like: “he said”, “she remarked”, or “they retorted quickly”.

See the section, below, from Sinclair LewisBabbit, chapter IV, section IV; a conversation between George Babbit and Paul Riesling.


“… Wanta speak Mist’ Riesling, Mist’ Babbit Talking … ‘Lo, Paul?”

“S George speaking.”
“How’s old socks?”
“Fair to middlin’.How ‘re you?”
“Fine, Paulibus. Well, what do you know?”

“Oh, nothing much.”

“Where you been keepin’ yourself?”

“Oh, just stickin’ round. What’s up, Georgie?”

“How ’bout lil lunch ‘s noon?”
“Be all right with me, I guess. Club?”

“Yuh. Meet you there twelve-thirty.”
“A’ right. Twelve thirty. S’ long, Georgie.”

Note that Lewis used the dialogue, itself to indicate which of his character is speaking without repeated “He said, She said”. You may want to experiment with this style dialogue in your own writing.

Often, dialogue in writing reflects heavy use of slang and contractions. See below for an example, again from Lewis’ Babbit; chapter VI, section III; this time Mrs. Babbit to their son, Ted.

“Snoway talkcher father.”

This is an extreme example, but worth it if you can hear all the inflections. You would probably need to say it aloud to make it work.

In listening, I find myself “mis-hearing” statements which can be in two – or maybe more – ways, expressing totally different meanings. For example, we had a guest speaker at our church last evening. When talking about his son he told us he wanted to be “some kind of an engineer”. I, in my overly-critical manner, say his son wanted to be “some kinda Ninja near”. But that’s probably just me!

The disadvantage in writing what you hear is the danger of writing exactly what you hear, phonetically, is it may become totally unreadable: for example “Jeetyet” instead of “Did ja eat yet?” (This is usually used as an exercise in enunciation for actors, but my writing often reflects my other interests, experiences,  and backgrounds.)

Now, read over some of your work – especially books “in progress” – and see where you can improve it using these pointers. Your publisher will appreciate it and your readers will find you book much more readable!

So, until next time;
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New Page Link

Useful Links Page:

Take a minute to view the resources on the new Useful Links page. Let me know if it was at all useful and if you have any others you’d like to add. This can become a Write On! Publishing blog group interactive page.

Thanks so much for joining!

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“In Progress” Tab

If you’ve been here recently you noticed a page tab titled “Works in Progress”. Through recent discussions on LinkedIn and others, I have learned that posting an unprotected draft your book online is just like welcoming someone into your home and rob you. Therefore, I have removed that page.

I have been reading a book  dealing with this very subject and the complicated issues and processes of the copyright system and registering your copyright. You really need to read it. I found it on Smashwords as a free book.

They Stole Your Book Now What?, by Ruth Ann Nordin.

I have also downloaded it in PDF format directly onto my hard drive and may even print it out so I can refer to it easily if necessary. It’s that valuable a resource.


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New Books

Well … not exactly new books. I have listed my books, with links on each tab:

Devotionals and Meditations
edited from original manuscripts by Wayne Tilden

Letters From Bethlehem

The Adventures of Chris Mouse

These Are the Candles

I’d appreciate you reading, commenting, and even purchasing some – or all – of these books. I would told – and read in numerous places – that one of the best ways to let people know that you’re published is to blog about it.

So let’s just think of this post as “good marketing”.

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